19 May 2009

Love poetry as of late

So. This is my contribution to this weeks TOP. It's not really on prompt, but I liked it. I've been inspired to write love-y dove-y poetry as of late, although this is darker than I intended. Questions, comments and constructive criticisms are always welcome.


Rain cascading down car windows
Mimics the feeling pouring inside
Eyes close for the space of a moment
A lone tear silently escapes
Forging a path of heart break, loneliness and grief
Splashing into a pool of love, lust and desire
Ripples on the pristine waters
Upset the fragile balance
Sending lives spinning into chaos
Unexplained emotions bubble to the surface
Never say never when it comes to matters of the heart

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